Turn Your Love Story Into a Bestseller: Get Feedback That Makes Your Romance Shine

My tailored beta reading service pinpoints strengths, identifies areas for improvement, and provides actionable insights to make your manuscript market-ready.

Don’t Let Your Manuscript Fall Flat

Gain Objective

It’s easy to get too close to your story and lose perspective. That’s where I come in. I’ll provide a fresh, expert perspective on your manuscript.
How it helps you:

  • No more second-guessing your characters, pacing, or romantic tension.

  • Actionable feedback gives you a clear roadmap for revisions.

  • Gain confidence knowing your story resonates with the romance audience.

Step-by-Step Breakdown of the Process

Here’s exactly what you can expect when working with me to beta read your romance novel:

Step 1: Submit Your Manuscript

After your purchase, you’ll receive a secure link to upload your manuscript.

  • Accepted Formats: Word (.doc/.docx) or PDF.

  • Don’t worry—your work is handled with complete confidentiality.

Step 4: Receive Your Feedback

Your personalized feedback will be delivered directly to your inbox. Depending on your package, this includes:

  • A detailed report highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.

  • Clear recommendations for enhancing your story, characters, and romance arc.

Save Time and Avoid Costly Mistakes

Revising a novel can feel overwhelming—especially when you’re juggling a busy life. My beta reading service ensures you focus your energy where it matters most, catching issues before they become costly mistakes.
How it helps you:

  • Identify plot holes, inconsistent character arcs, or weak romantic tension early.

  • Streamline your revision process with targeted suggestions.

  • Avoid the frustration of lukewarm reviews by delivering a story readers will love.

Step 2: Share Your Story Details

Fill out a brief questionnaire to provide me with insights about your manuscript, such as:

  • The subgenre of your romance (e.g., contemporary, historical, fantasy).

  • Areas you’d like us to focus on (e.g., character development, romantic tension, pacing).

  • Any specific questions or concerns you’d like addressed in the feedback.

Step 5 (Premium Only): Refine and Follow Up

  • Premium clients can submit a revised manuscript for a second round of feedback.

  • Enjoy a 30-minute consultation call to discuss your revisions and ask any remaining questions.

Tailor Your Story to Stand Out in the Market

Step 3: We Get to Work

Sit back and relax while I’ll dive into your story. Depending on your package, you’ll receive:

  • Basic Package: High-level feedback and a concise summary report.

  • Standard Package: In-depth chapter-by-chapter notes and detailed suggestions.

  • Premium Package: Comprehensive analysis, two rounds of feedback, and market insights.

Is Your Romance Novel Ready to Captivate Readers?

The romance genre is competitive, but your story can shine. I’ll help you refine your manuscript to resonate with readers while keeping your unique vision intact.
How it helps you:

  • Strengthen your romance arc, characters, and emotional impact.

  • Get tailored advice to ensure your story fits the expectations of your target subgenre.

  • Feel confident knowing your book is polished and market-ready.

Choose Your Beta Reading Package Now and take the next step toward publishing success!


Limited spots available – reserve yours today!

Packages &

Pricing

Pick Your Package and Let’s Get Started!

$125

Perfect for writers who need quick feedback on overall story direction and reader experience.

Basic Package

Writers looking for a quick, budget-friendly overview before diving into revisions.

DELIVERY - 1-2 Weeks

High-level feedback on plot and pacing

Feedback on romance arc and character development

Summary report with actionable suggestions (2-3 pages)

$200

Ideal for writers who want deeper insight into their manuscript to improve characters, plot, and emotional arcs.

Standard Package

Writers ready for deeper feedback to improve their manuscript and refine their story.

DELIVERY - 2-3 Weeks

High-level feedback on plot and pacing

Feedback on romance arc and character development

Summary report with actionable suggestions (5-7 pages)

Chapter-by-chapter feedback

Suggestions for improving tropes and avoiding clichés

Detailed report with examples and suggestions

$350

The comprehensive option for authors who want a polished manuscript ready for editors, agents, or self-publishing.

Premium Package

Writers who want extensive guidance and professional-level refinement.

DELIVERY - 4 Weeks

High-level feedback on plot and pacing

Feedback on romance arc and character development

Summary report with actionable suggestions (10+ pages)

Chapter-by-chapter feedback

Suggestions for improving tropes and avoiding clichés

Detailed report with examples and suggestions

Two rounds of feedback

Personalized market alignment recommendations

10+ page comprehensive report with scene-level notes

Live consultation call (30 minutes)